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Life is an adventure, but death is a bigger one for no one knows what comes after this life. So it is the biggest adventure of all. And I will embrace it with open arms. I am ready.
I logged in and saw this on the front page, it cought my eye, I knew it was you who wrote this, I just knew. I like it very much, I don't think he will ever return, it will mean death to them both. but you have captured his desperate emtions so well, thank you sweetie thank you for everything
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But in the end, what choice did I have? -- Kain
They fear what they don't understand; and they despise what they fear. But no; I do not hate them. -- Janos
I am so glad you like it. Yes I feel the same. Even as I was writing it It was more a desperate plea than anything else. You are so welcome. I am so glad you like it.
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Life is an adventure, but death is a bigger one for no one knows what comes after this life. So it is the biggest adventure of all. And I will embrace it with open arms. I am ready.
Your poems allways have this kind of magic to me that sets my imagination in motion. The despreate feel, the long lost love, the end of all hope and the bitterness of life are such a power given combinations that I can't help but loving it. Since I stumbeld up here I've started to write again, one more of the gifts you have given back to me. I never realised how much I missed it untill you opend my eyes. For all of that I'm very gratefull, and I'm printing this poem and will keep it in my writers map as a wonderfull and dear token of our friendship. thanks hunni, from the bottom of my heart
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But in the end, what choice did I have? -- Kain
They fear what they don't understand; and they despise what they fear. But no; I do not hate them. -- Janos
I am so glad I helped you back into writing. It is the best outlet of everything. You are most welcome. Your words of support help keep me going so I am more than happy to have written something for you. Anything for my wonderful friend.
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Life is an adventure, but death is a bigger one for no one knows what comes after this life. So it is the biggest adventure of all. And I will embrace it with open arms. I am ready.
The carrion crows call my name. Their calls will go unanswered My fate lies in your arms, love. Not on a blood drenched battle field.
Sorry, I'm not trying to step on your toes, that was just so beautiful done that I couldn't resist writing a verse. Truly inspirational. but now I'll go back to the writing I'm supposed to be doing lol and quit butting in on your poems lol. Again, it was meant as a compliment don't get mad at me
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I reject your reality and substitute my own - Adam - Mythbusters
Wow, I inspired that. Wow. Not mad at all. It is always good to hear what people get from my poems. And wow. That was a good verse. I love it. Thank you
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Life is an adventure, but death is a bigger one for no one knows what comes after this life. So it is the biggest adventure of all. And I will embrace it with open arms. I am ready.
*Phew* I was a little nervous that I was being really cheeky there. I'm so happy that you didn't take offense.
That really was an awesome poem that's why I just couldn't resist The longing and determination came through so vibrantly that I could "see" the emotions. Stunningly beautiful.
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I reject your reality and substitute my own - Adam - Mythbusters
No not at all. Of course not. It is pointless to resist the urge of writing. it nags at you. I am really glad, it was what I wanted. That those emotions came through loud and clear. Thank you so much
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Life is an adventure, but death is a bigger one for no one knows what comes after this life. So it is the biggest adventure of all. And I will embrace it with open arms. I am ready.
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One who lives without love can never truly live... One who embraces love can never truly die... 'kiwi-damnation'
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Life is an adventure, but death is a bigger one for no one knows what comes after this life. So it is the biggest adventure of all. And I will embrace it with open arms. I am ready.
I like it very much, I don't think he will ever return, it will mean death to them both.
but you have captured his desperate emtions so well, thank you sweetie
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But in the end, what choice did I have? -- Kain
They fear what they don't understand; and they despise what they fear.
But no; I do not hate them. -- Janos
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Life is an adventure, but death is a bigger one for no one knows what comes after this life. So it is the biggest adventure of all. And I will embrace it with open arms. I am ready.
Since I stumbeld up here I've started to write again, one more of the gifts you have given back to me. I never realised how much I missed it untill you opend my eyes.
For all of that I'm very gratefull, and I'm printing this poem and will keep it in my writers map as a wonderfull and dear token of our friendship.
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But in the end, what choice did I have? -- Kain
They fear what they don't understand; and they despise what they fear.
But no; I do not hate them. -- Janos
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Life is an adventure, but death is a bigger one for no one knows what comes after this life. So it is the biggest adventure of all. And I will embrace it with open arms. I am ready.
Their calls will go unanswered
My fate lies in your arms, love.
Not on a blood drenched battle field.
Sorry, I'm not trying to step on your toes, that was just so beautiful done that I couldn't resist writing a verse.
Truly inspirational.
but now I'll go back to the writing I'm supposed to be doing lol and quit butting in on your poems lol.
Again, it was meant as a compliment don't get mad at me
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I reject your reality and substitute my own - Adam - Mythbusters
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Life is an adventure, but death is a bigger one for no one knows what comes after this life. So it is the biggest adventure of all. And I will embrace it with open arms. I am ready.
That really was an awesome poem that's why I just couldn't resist
The longing and determination came through so vibrantly that I could "see" the emotions. Stunningly beautiful.
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I reject your reality and substitute my own - Adam - Mythbusters
It is pointless to resist the urge of writing. it nags at you.
I am really glad, it was what I wanted. That those emotions came through loud and clear. Thank you so much
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Life is an adventure, but death is a bigger one for no one knows what comes after this life. So it is the biggest adventure of all. And I will embrace it with open arms. I am ready.
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