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Welcoming the Night by =Malandante:iconMalandante:

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Hi Everyone, I know I haven't been on a lot recently but I have this for you guys to enjoy. It is also the last of my birthday present to *grimagix. Enjoy.

The hair took me forever to do and I am pleased with it now. Everything else was pretty simple. Please let me know if the writing is difficult to read. And I will try and fix that.

Any critique is welcome.

Credits:

Model: :iconliam-stock: = [link]
Background :iconjlstock:
Brushes :iconflordelys-stock: = [link]

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=CSnyder Jul 8, 2009, 5:26:08 AM
shes wonderful adn a lovely scene, the poem is great, well done indeed and a great gift for a great person:hug:
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=Malandante Jul 8, 2009, 5:31:08 AM
Thank you so much Chris, I am glad you enjoyed it, I wish I had finished it earlier but alas it is up now. :hug: Thanks also for the fave :glomp:

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The cold sensation of steel, upon my skin sends a shiver down my spine.
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=CSnyder Jul 8, 2009, 5:32:26 AM
youre most welcome hun:hug:
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=Malandante Jul 8, 2009, 5:46:03 AM
:iconhuggleplz:

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The cold sensation of steel, upon my skin sends a shiver down my spine.
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*qxvw198 Jul 8, 2009, 5:47:02 AM
The writing is easy to read. Overall a very nice creation.

The edge of the rectangle around the lettering it a bit distracting, particularly down through the moon.

It should be possible for you to make the edges of the rectangle get gradually more transparent so it "fades" into the stuff behind it. The program I use, Paint Shop Pro, calls this a mask.

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You don't call someone a "Mad Scientist" because he is angry all of the time. And if I am off of my medications....
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*Valedhelven Jul 8, 2009, 5:49:33 AM
Well done - hair turned out great! :clap: And the poem reads fine - the only thing that I found distracting are the commas at the end of every line - kinda broke of the flow a bit, but nothing major :reading:

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Welcome to MY fantasy realm: [link]
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=Malandante Jul 8, 2009, 6:19:06 AM
Thank you so much Hun, I am so glad you like it.

I shall remove the commas now before I forget. :glomp:

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The cold sensation of steel, upon my skin sends a shiver down my spine.
:iconmalandante:
=Malandante Jul 8, 2009, 6:19:39 AM
Alright cool I shall look into it.

So glad you like it.

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The cold sensation of steel, upon my skin sends a shiver down my spine.
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=th3krimzon1 Jul 8, 2009, 7:48:48 AM
:wow: :clap: Well done!!!!

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